My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Having read and enjoyed the first book, ‘In Ora,’ I found it was essential reading for the first couple of chapters of this sequel. This is because, despite the short prequel, ‘To Ora,’ (which is confusingly called an Epilogue rather than the Prologue) the writing style throughout the book continues the reader’s confusion and dilemma, with its constant unclear changing of the various characters’ point of view. This was also a particular problem with the dialogue. The occasional inclusion of the phrase: ‘he said’ or ‘she said’ etc would have helped this reader enormously. Too much was taken for granted in those sections. I was constantly having to refer back to find out whose voice I was meant to be listening to. Unfortunately, that and the author’s very strange way of expressing certain parts of the narrative, with its common idioms and clichés spoilt my overall enjoyment of the story.
I was still rooting for Luke and Ruyi who are now in hiding from Sphene and his group, including the equally ruthless Quillon. In the prequel we discover more about Luke’s father and his childhood friend, Anny, which does help to explain a lot about past and future circumstances.
The ever present affection between Luke and Ruyi maintains a mayor element of the whole book. It is very touching and still so well done. The contrast between the two societies, the superior Orans and the desperately poorer Origins, lies at the heart of this dystopian book and provides the urgency for readers to keep turning the pages; and that is also well done.
I found it refreshing for Luke and Ruyi together, to begin to consider some of the morality and ethics that may exist behind the actions and cruelty that are, inevitably, behind warfare and its battles for power. This is notwithstanding the aims and methods behind the Oran’s genetic experiments, since these help to reveal the reasons for needing human subjects, like Luke and others from Origin’s population.
Were it not for the frequent spelling errors and poor grammar here and there I would have been able to give this a higher rating, as previously. But with some re-editing and some re-arrangement this fascinating, exciting and compelling story would have had my ardent recommendation.
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