My rating: 4 of 5 stars
I found the beginning of the story a little bit too like a documentary in the telling of Johanna’s tale of woe. It felt like a narrative about the pros and cons of divorce. But when Ica Iova began to apply her excellent writing skills to dialogue and description I began to be pulled into it more. I enjoyed being fooled by the various twists and turns as this contemporary thriller moved along at an acceptable pace. The main character is well-drawn and I was quite convinced by her self-analysis and roller coaster emotions alternating between bitter, angry regret and fearful hope for her future and that of her kids. When romance appeared on the scene I thought Ms Iova’s descriptions of Johanna’s doubts and raw emotion (even lust!) realistic and believable.
The main problems for me came later when the plot involved Johanna’s children and the final denouement. Having completely convinced me of her desperation to gain custody of her children it felt most unreal for Johanna to drive off for a break, getting away from it all, without her children at the exact time she had them all to herself! It was obviously necessary for the plot, but what followed on that trip seemed too much of a coincidence. The kids also came across as too mature and knowing for juveniles of 8 and 9 years old. Unfortunately, the end of the book felt too rushed, without a proper appreciation for the character of the killer being given to the reader. While I greatly admired the author’s writing and story-telling ability I felt this novel would be improved by a little more polishing. I was given a copy of the book in return for an honest and objective review.
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